Saturday, January 14, 2012

Procrastination Station (mjon)?

I'm currently doing poetry at college so will read most things at the moment as a diversion from trying to understand the metaphysicals. I liked it, nice work and nice sentiment, only criticism is I would replace the word 'screwing' with something else as it sticks out like a sore thumb and make you look young or lacking in vocabulary. Otherwise good though.

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